A Sad Memory
Today in my English class , a classmate talked about a sad experience that she had when she was young.Her mother died in a car accident and it was the saddest memory of her life. When I heard her story I felt a little uncomfortable and sad by her .On the other hand, It's not common that someone choose this kind of subject for the English proyect , most students choose to talk about travels or enjoyable experiences ,however she choosed a very personal subject.
In my opinion , she was very brave by sharing her experience with everyone , few people could do it.
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A Sad Memory
Today in my English class , a classmate talked about a sad experience that she had when she was young. Her mother died in a car accident, and it was the saddest memory of her life. When I heard her story, I felt a little uncomfortable and saddened by her story. On the other hand, It's not common that someone chooses this kind of subject for the this English project; most students chose to talk about their travels or enjoyable experiences. However she chose a very personal subject.
Very nicely written, Malú! Your English is very good! Please feel free to ask me if you have any questions =)
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A Sad Memory
Today in my English class, a classmate talked about a sad experience that she had when she was young. Her mother died in a car accident and it was the saddest memory of her life. When I heard her story, I felt a little uncomfortable and sad by for her. On the other hand, It's not common that for someone to choose this kind of subject for their English proyect project. mMost students choose to talk about travels or enjoyable experiences, however she choosed chose a very personal subject.In my opinion, she was very brave by for sharing her experience with everyone,. fFew people could do it.
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