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Trip to Europe The last year, I went on a trip to Brussels. There I have my family; my aunt and my cousins. They live there. When I went to Brussels I saw an important momument; the Atomium. In Brussels the weather was cold, it was rainning. The temperature was very low. This year I will go on a trip to Paris in the car. I will go with my family. On the trip we'll stop in differents countries. In the future I'll would like to go to England for to improve my English.

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Trip to Europe

The Last year, I went on a trip to Brussels. There I have my family*; my aunt and my cousins. They live there. When I went to Brussels I saw an important monument; the Atomium. In Brussels the weather was cold, it was raining. The temperature was very low.

This year I will go on a trip to Paris in the by car. I will go with my family. On the trip we'll stop in differents countries.
In the future I'll I would like to go to England for to improve my English.


Well written Alba! 

* "There I have my family" - If all or most of your family are there (parents, brother, sister, etc.), it's OK the way you wrote it. However, if the only family members in brussels are your aunt and cousins, it would be better to say "There I have some family" (or "I have some family there")

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Trip to Europe

Last year, I went on a trip to Brussels. There I have my family; my aunt and my cousins. They live there. When I went to Brussels I saw an important monument; the Atomium. In Brussels the weather was cold, it was raining. The temperature was very low.

This year I am going a trip to Paris by car. I will be going with my family. On the trip, we'll stop in differents countries.
In the future I'll would The verbs, 'll and would, are both modal verbs. You cannot use two modal verbs in one clause. Remove one of these verbs- so either pick "will go to" or "would like to go to"  England for to improve my English.
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Trip to Europe

The Last year, I went on a trip to Brussels. There I have where my family lives, including my aunt and my cousins. They live there. While I was there, I saw an important monument: the Atomium. In Brussels, the weather was cold, and it was rained. The temperature was very low.

This year I will go on a trip to Paris in the by car. I will go with my family. On this trip we'll stop in different countries.
In the future, I'll would like to go to England for to improve my English.


(good job!)

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Trip to Europe

The Last year I went on a trip to Brussels ro visit There I have my family; my aunt and my cousins that  live there. When I went to Brussels During my trip, I saw an important monument; the Atomium. In Brussels the weather was cold and it was rainy. The temperature was very low.

This year I am going on a trip to Paris by car. I am going with my family. During the trip we'll stop in different countries.


In the future I would like to go to England for to improve my English.


Great effort Alba! There were only minor mistakes. Keep it up!

Jer

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