Find the lie
Hello to all of you.
Today I’m going to tell you three things about me, one of them would be false. So I start.
The first one: When I was a child I used to find and to take in house a wide variety of animals like hedgehogs, bats or moles. My mother was not very happy.
After, when I was young, I was picked by a scientist research for DNA modification about performing the human photosynthesis. But, by the date when the project should started I had a cold, and I was out. The project was failed anyway, and my other partners now have green skin, but cannot do the photosynthesis.
Finally, I become crazy with anything with sugar, especially candies, in fact I have often stolen my children’s candies, and if I have not a sugar dose per day I fell bad.
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Find the lie
Hello everyoneToday I’m going to tell you three things about me, one of them will be false. So here we go.
The first one: When I was a child I used to find and to take home a wide variety of animals like hedgehogs, bats or moles. My mother was not very happy.
Second fact. , when I was young, I was picked by a research scientist
Finally, I become crazy about anything with sugar, especially candies, in fact I have often stolen my children’s candies, and if I do not have my daily sugar dosage / my daily dose of sugar I feel bad.
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Find the lie
Hello everyone to all of you.Today I’m going to tell you three things about me but one of them will would be false. So I start.
Firstly The first one: When I was a child I used to find and to take in house a wide variety of animals like hedgehogs, bats, or moles. My mother was not very happy.
Second: When I was young, I was picked by a research scientist scientist research for DNA modification about performing the human photosynthesis. But, by the date when the project should have started I had a cold, and I was out. The project was a failure failed anyway, and my other partners now have green skin, but cannot do the photosynthesis.
Finally, I'm crazy about I become crazy with anything with sugar, especially candies, in fact I have often stolen my children’s candies, and if I don't have have not a sugar dose per some sugar every day I feel fell bad.
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The fact about your addiction to sugar and taking candies from children is false, of course.:)
I am glad to read your stories and see that you continue practicing your English. As to me it seems that the beginning of the spring is not easy time, and it is hard to do anything besides the necessary. So, I continue learning Spanish but very lazy and slowly.
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Well, you are right Ray, It is not exactly that I steal candies from my children. But sometimes my mother bring in big bags of candies, she give me they for children, but children do not know it... I only do not give them it. The main reason is because I think candies are not healthy, but I recognize is not the only reason...
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I cannot believe that you steal candies from children!!
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