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Tesis - this is the abstract
Aim: Determine the level of dissatisfaction about body image in teenagers from the I.E José Olaya Balandra October 2015.Methodology: Type quantitative, descriptive and cross-sectional study. It was evaluated to 80 students of 4th grade in secondary that met inclusion and exclusion criteria and which declared by the Test “yes / not” have dissatisfaction about his image body (It should say his or her body image). For the collection of the data is applied the questionnaire BSQ instrument validated and reliable.
Results: 46% of the respondents have a high level of dissatisfaction about body image, 29% intermediate and only 25% of the evaluated presented a low level of body dissatisfaction.
Conclusions: the 4th high school of the José I.E. Olaya Balandra teens present high level of dissatisfaction about body image.
*please, help me!! this is a document very important for me!!
Thesis - Abstract
Aim: To determine the level of dissatisfaction about body image amongst teenagers from the I.E José Olaya Balandra October 2015.Methodology: This was a quantitative, descriptive and cross-sectional study*. The sample comprised 80 students of 4th grade secondary school, who met inclusion and exclusion criteria and who answered by either “yes / no” according to whether or not they were satisfied with their body image. For the collection of the data is applied the questionnaire BSQ(?) instrument was validated and reliable.
Results: 46% of the respondents have a high level of dissatisfaction about body image, 29% intermediate and only 25% of the evaluated presented a low level of body dissatisfaction.**
Conclusions: the 4th high school of the José I.E. Olaya Balandra teens present high level of dissatisfaction about their body image. Aha!! Aha!!**
I think it is best if you write explicitly what your questions were. From your replies, were they:
How satisfied are you with your body image (tick one only):
1. Highly dissasatisfied [ ]
2. Neutral [ ]
3. Not dissatisfied. [ ]
????????
One must explicitly mention these questions. Also to show a sample from the questionnaire.
*it may be better here to write 36 (46%) had a high level, 25 (29%) intermediate, and ... of the respondents answered to a low level of... [I don't know the exact numbers; I have no calculator]. In any case, raw figures are always preferable to percentages. This way you have both!
*please, help me!! this is a document very important for me!!
*stratified sample?
Very well written!
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