Silence
It's been a tough week.
A volunteer, who was supposed to stay here until next month, has gone back to her country due to a family issue. And now, I am the only person staying here as volunteer. moreover, the chef, who is a nice person, is on her holiday until the day I leave. Which means, basically, I will be working by myself almost everyday and I will have no one to talk to. Besides, the host here obviously does not like to communicate with people. (Even he did, I wouldn't enjoy chatting with him.) What’s more, I have not much food to eat since we have less customers this week and next week. I've been eating leftovers. But, fortunately, I just have to hang in there for another week.
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Silence
It's been a tough week.A volunteer, who was supposed to stay here until next month, has gone back to her country due to a family issue; And (Although there's no rule against it, it's best not to start sentences with conjunctions such as "and.") now I am the only person staying here as a volunteer. Moreover, the chef, who is a nice person, is on her holiday until the day I leave, which means, basically, I will be working by myself almost every day and I will have with (What you wrote is fine. I just thought I'd shorten it.) no one to talk to. Besides, the host here obviously does not like to communicate with people. (Even he did, I wouldn't enjoy chatting with him.) What’s more, I do not have not much food to eat since we have less fewer (Use "fewer" if the item is countable.) customers this week and next week. I've been eating leftovers, but, fortunately, I just have to hang in there for another week.
Your English is very strong, Madoca! Most of my corrections are not mistakes, but suggestions for how your sentences can sound better. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. I wish you luck in your remaining days as a volunteer =)
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Deathly Silence
It's been a tough week.A volunteer, supposed to stay here until next month, has returned to her country due to a family issue. And now, I am the only volunteer remaining. Also, the nice chef is on holiday until the day I leave. This means I will be working by myself almost everyday with no one to talk to. Also, the host here is clearly taciturn. Although even if he weren't I would not enjoy chatting with him. What’s more, I have not much food to eat since we have less customers this week and the next. I've been eating leftovers, but, fortunately, I just have to hang in there for another week.
Very well written!
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