My favorite sport My favorite sport is basketball. Because it is so cool. So I like NBA. My favotite team is Spurs. The team is very good teamwork. I want to watch game in person someday!

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Hi there! Here are my corrections, let me know if you have any questions! I have rearranged some of it to make the sentences a bit longer. Joining smaller sentences to make bigger ones really helps the flow of the writing.

My favorite sport

My favorite sport is basketball because it is so cool. (when you say 'because' you can join the sentence onto the sentence before)
So I like NBA and (best to join that really short sentence onto the next sentence with 'and')my favorite team is Spurs because they play very well as a team. The team is very good teamwork.
I want to watch a (needs 'a' here because it is a countable noun)game in person someday!

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