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My informal letter to my close friend. Hello, Michael. I apologize for not being in touch for a while, I’ve been so busy. You know, I’ve been participating in one important project at my work, but the hard part of it has been over and I have enough time to write you. How are things with you? What about your work? Last time you wrote me that you were looking for a job. What’s the result? I would like to say that 2 days ago I met Lena (she used to study at school with us, do you remember her?), and she told me that she had got a good position (of a project manager) in a big mining company. I’m so happy for her success. She seems to work close to my home and I hope we’ll meet more often. Don’t forget about my previous invitation! You should come to us this summer. I have already been planning our vacation. It’ll be awesome. Maybe you want to know smth else about me, feel free to ask any questions. I’ve attached some recent photos of me. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Tonya.

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First of all, this is brilliant, well done. I shall just add a few things that will help define your words and add emphasis  :)

My informal letter to my close friend.

Hello, Michael.

I apologize for not being in touch for a while, I’ve been so busy. As you know, I’ve been participating in an important project at my work, however, the hard part of it has finished and I have enough time to write you.

How are things with you; What about your work? Last time you wrote me that you were looking for a job. What’s the result?
I would like to say that 2 days ago I met Lena (she used to study at school with us, do you remember her?), she told me that she had got a good position (of a project manager) in a big mining company. I’m so happy for her success. She seems to work close to my home and I hope we’ll meet more often.

Don’t forget about my previous invitation! You should come to us this summer. I have already been planning our vacation.
It’ll be awesome.

You might want to know something else about me, feel free to ask any questions.
I’ve attached some recent photos of myself.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes,
Tonya.
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My informal letter to my close friend.

Hello, Michael.

I apologize for not being in touch for a while, I’ve been so busy. You know, I’ve been participating in an important project at work, but the hard part of it is over and I have enough time to write you.
How are things with you? What about your work? Last time you wrote me that you were looking for a job. What’s the result?
I would like to say that 2 days ago I met Lena (she used to study at school with us, do you remember her?), and she told me that she had got a good position (of a project manager) in a big mining company. I’m so happy for her success. She seems to work close to my home and I hope we’ll meet more often.
Don’t forget about my previous invitation! You should come to us this summer. I have already been planning our vacation. It’ll be awesome.
Maybe you want to know something else about me, feel free to ask any questions.
I’ve attached some recent photos of me.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes,
Tonya.

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