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Self-help traveling Nowadays, more and more students choose self-help traveling when they are making the plan of the journey. The reason why they choose this way of the journey is that the self-help traveling is much more cheap and free, Firstly, they can choose the hotel, the way of traveling even though the food that they want, rather than depend on the travel agency or the guide. Secondly, the guide likely take the tourist to shopping when they get to a scenic spots. The most important is that we must wait the others and it is waste time. In my opinion, i support the students choose the self-help traveling, however, we must pay attention of ours safeties.

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Self-help traveling

Nowadays, more and more students choose self-help traveling when they are planning a journey. The reason why they choose this, is because self-help traveling is either more affordable or free.

Firstly, they can choose the hotel, the way of traveling, and also the food that they want; rather than depend on the travel agency or the guide. Secondly, the guide would potentially take the tourist to the shopping areas when they get to a scenic spot.
The most important aspect is that we must wait for the others, which, is a waste time.

In my opinion, i support the students whom choose the self-help traveling, however, we must pay attention of our own safety.

Well done, this writing was very good. 

What I changed was the grammar, to complete the sentences used and to emphasize certain points :) 
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请你把“self-help traveling"这些词解释清楚你的意思。无论是 “一个人旅行“ 还是 “人们不需要旅行社提供什么服务”,我不太清楚

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