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选择最好的地方很难。我特别喜爱旅行。世界有很多美丽的和有趣的城市。我去到了不太多国，可是我仍不知道什么地方最好。当我去了每个国的时候我可以说。
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选择最好的地方很难。我特别喜爱旅行。世界(instead of saying 世界，we should say 世界上，equivalent to “in the world” in English)有很多美丽的和有趣的城市。我去到了(到了means "arrived", it's better to say"过了" which literally means 'passed', equivalent to English "had been")不太多(not sure whether you want to say "not many"? if it is, then it's a bit confusing when read the "仍still"in the next sentence, it's not very logical to say i "still" don't know where is the best if i had been to "not many" countries, may be you can change "不太多"to"一些"which means "some")国(国should be changed to 国家，in Chinese, most words appear in two characters, even 国 as a character does mean "country" in Chinese, it's better to used the word"国家")，可是我仍不知道什么地方最好。当我(is it better to add a "也许maybe" before this sentence? as this is a subjective statement, without "maybe/perhaps" it sounds somewhat arbitrary)去了每个国的时候(is it better to say "后 after” instead of "时候time")我可以说(it's better to say "我会知道 i will know" which is corresponding to the previous sentence)。one more thing about the punctuation, as this whole passage is conveying a SINGLE topic, it can be taken as one sentence. So no need to put so many periods.
The corrected version: 选择最好的地方很难，我特别喜爱旅行，世界上有很多美丽和有趣的城市，我去过了不太多国家，可我仍然不知道什么地方最好，也许，当我去了每个国家后我会知道。
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选择最好的地方很难。我特别喜爱旅行。世界有很多美丽的和有趣的城市。我去到了不太多国去过了一些国家，可是我仍不知道说不出什么地方最好。也许当我去过了每个国家的时候我就可以说的出了。0
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讲哪个地方最好很难。我特爱旅行，世界上有很多美丽而有趣的城市。
我去过不少国家，很难讲最好的是哪一个。
我去每个国家时都可以说它是最好的。
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选择最好的地方很难。我特别喜爱旅行。世界有很多美丽的和有趣的城市。我去到了不太多国，可是我仍不知道什么地方最好。当我去了每个国的时候我可以说。更加地道和流畅的版本:
我特别喜爱旅行，但是很难说哪个旅行地点最好。世界上有很多美丽又有趣的城市，但我去的国家不太多，所以更说不出哪里最好，也许只有去过每一个国家，我才能说出来。
Try some associated words,like 虽然，但是，只有，才能，you will do a better job！
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选择最好的地方很难。我特别喜爱旅行。世界上有很多美丽的和有趣的城市。我去到了不太多国我去过的国家不太多，可是我仍不知道什么地方最好。（better 也许，）当我去了每个国国家的时候之后我就可以说知道了。Want to progress faster?
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