My favourite history book

I am very fond of Yongzheng Emperor by Eryue He, a history novel about the life of this fifth emperor of the Qing Dynasty. ("Dynasty" 因为属于“清朝”朝代名字，所以需要大写。) It is not the way he is usually portrayed in many romance television series nowadays. In this book, his private romantic relationship is barely mentioned. It concentrates on his disputed succession and brings the whole thing (能避开写 "thing" 就最好避开，因为 "thing" 在英文里算少儿年龄的词。) topic vividly to life. You can (写的时候最好不要这样用 "you"。) It's easy to feel the extremely intense atmosphere between the Yongzheng Emperor, and his other eight brothers, and even his own father. Usually, we think he is a cold blood and vigorous ruler, but in this book, you we can see many other sides of his life.

写得很好，Don！你的英文非常厉害！希望我改的对你有帮助。继续加油学习！

My favourite history book

It is not in the way that he is usually portrayed in the many romance television series nowadays.> The written account of his life in this book is rather different from what is usually portrayed in the many romance television series about his life that we have been seeing nowadays.

In this book, his personal romantic relationships are barely mentioned.

It is concentrates on  his diputed succession and brings the whole thing vividly to life.> The book concentrates more on his disputed succession to the throne, and it was written in a way that brings all the intrigues at his court vividly to life.

You can feel the extremely intense atmosphere between Yongzheng Emperor and his other eight brothers and even his own father.

> You can have a sense of the extremely intense political atmosphere in his court that were brought about by his deteriorating relationships with his eight brothers and even with his own father.

Usually we think that he was a cold blood and vigorous ruler, but in this book, you can see many other sides of his life.> We usually think of him as a cold-blooded and tyrannical ruler, but after reading this book, you will see that there are many other sides of him that may change your mind about him.