Corrections · 3
Shoes for walking.
I go to my office to walk about 30 minutes every day.If you want to say that you walk to your office, you should say 'I go to my office by foot'.
'By foot' literally means '足を使って', therefore it means '歩いて行く'.
I bought my shoes last summer and It have damaged.
They have become damaged.
I would like to know what shoes would be more comfortable for me.
Instead of 'what', say 'what kind of shoes'.
If you have a big knowledge for walking shoes, please let me know. Thank you.
Instead of 'if you have big knowledge', say 'if you know a lot about shoes'!
Well done!
Shoes for walking.
I go to my office to walk about 30 minutes every day. X > I walk about 30 minutes to my office everyday.> You go to your office to walk = you walk in your office ???? = I go to my bed to sleep .
I bought my shoes last summer and It have damaged. > I bought a pair of shoes last summer, and it is damaged now.
I bought my shoes > You mean you bought all your shoes last summer ??? Or you only have one pair ?
I would like to know what shoes more comfortable for me. >I like to know what ( types of )shoes are more suitable for walking, yet comfortable.
> The shoes you are wearing now are comfortable , aren't there? Or else you would not have bought them . You should say "suitable" instead.
If you have a big knowledge for walking shoes, please let me know. Thank you.> If you are knowledgeable about shoes, please let me know . Thank you.
Big knowledge ? If you a broad knowledge of shops = knowledgeable .
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
