Finding Nemo

We all know that cartoon movies are one of the best forms of entertainment things (Avoid using the word "things." It sounds very childish.) for children, and but not only for them. As with everything else, we have our favorites here too, and my favorite animated movie is Finding Nemo. The Pixar production of Finding Nemo is about the a father who looks for his son through whole an entire ocean. It is about all the warmth things that we have in our lives: About family, love, and the courage that we can demonstrate for them. There are lots of funny moments in this movie and that can be intresting you to audiences. I like the scope that you fell (It's best not to use the "royal you" when writing.) is felt when you watching this movie, and of course, who doesn't like quiet ocean waters with all the secrets that it hides underneath? It was very interesting for me when I was child, but and it is still interesting for me now as well.

Nicely written Катя. I hope my corrections and notes are helpful. Please feel free to ask any questions you may have =)