We Were Just Friends
Last month, I told someone that I liked him. Can you believe that was my first time to show my confession of love to somebody? Being known my own feeling about him, I was so strained and agitated that I had not closed my eyes for two night. It terribly sucks. For god sake, I could not review my subjects during my preparing final test without sleeping. My eyes ware staring on the book,but my mind was fixed on something.At the night before taking the last test, I couldn't hide my mind anymore, so I sent a text to tell him my ture feeling about him.
In the past few years, it was him that having dinner with me，walking with me, studying in the library with me, hanging out with me sometimes, even taking the same bus to hometown. It's all right. It's just my own feeling about everything we have exprienced together.
Unfortunately his answer was indirect but not. I shed tears for my hopeless love. Now I get recovered from sad. I won't stay for any pity.
Thanks for the man I met, I am moving on.
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We Were Just Friends
Last month, I told someone that I liked him. Can you believe that was my the first time to show I showed my confession of love to somebody? Being known my own feeling Knowing my own feeling about him, I was so strained and agitated that I had not closed could not close* my eyes for two nights. It terribly sucks sucks terribly. For god sake, I could not recite review my subjects during my preparing final test my final test preparation without sleeping. My eyes were staring on at the book, but my mind was fixed on something else. At On the night before taking the last test, I couldn't hide my mind feeling anymore, so I sent a text to tell telling him my true feeling about him.In the past few years, it was him that (he was having dinner with me, walking with me, studying in the library with me, hanging out together with me, sometimes, even taking the same bus home)**. It's all right. It's just my own feeling about everything we have experienced together.
Unfortunately his answer was indirect but no. I shed tears for my hopeless love. Now I get recovered from sad. Now I have recovered from my sadness. I won't stay for any pity out of pity.
Thanks for the man I met (?), I am moving on.
*I suggest you use contraction e.g could not -> couldn't as it feels more natural in this context.
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We Were Just Friends
Last month, I told someone that I liked him. Can you believe that was my first time confessing my love to somebody? Knowing my own feelings about him, I was so strained and agitated that I did not close my eyes for two nights. It sucks terribly. For God's sake, I could not study for my final test without sleeping. My eyes ware staring at the book, but my mind was fixed on something else. The night before taking the last test, I didn't want to hide my thoughts anymore, so I sent him a text to tell him my true feelings.
In the past few years, we had dinner, walked together, studied in the library and hung out sometimes. We even took the same bus to our hometown. It's all right. Those are just my feelings about everything we experienced together.
Unfortunately his answer was an indirect no. I shed tears for my hopeless love. Now I'm recovered from my sadness. I won't live in pity.
Thanks to the man I met, I am moving on.
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