learning swim
Today I went to the club with my daughter for practice swim, she is learning to swim, I think that is very important because is very dangerous this is your live in risk.
she has 8 years old and energy a lot for spend, she often to swim school 2 times per week for practice and learn more.
this is it. thanks for correction.
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Learning to swim
Today I went to the a club with my daughter for to practice swimming. She is learning to swim, and I think that is very important because not knowing how to swim is very dangerous this is your because it can put her life in at risk.
This is it. Thanks for your corrections.
Nicely written, Ailton! It sounds like you really enjoy watching your daughter learn to swim =)
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Learning to swim:
Today I went to the club with my daughter for to practice swimming. She is learning to swim, and I think that it's very important because swimming is very dangerous and this is puts your life in at risk. She has is 8 years old and has a lot of energy a lot for spend to burn. She often to swims twice a school 2 times per week at school, to for practice and learn more.this is it. thanks for correction.
PLEASE NOTE: There are many ways to express these ideas, but I made changes based on common practices. There are multiple ways to say this though. :)
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learning to swim
Today I went to the club with my daughter for practicing swimming. She is learning to swim. I think that is very important because it is very dangerous if you dont know swimming and your life is in risk.She has is 8 years old and has a lot of energy to a lot for spend. She often goes to swim in school 2 times per week for practicing and learning more.
this is it. thanks for correction.
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