A beautifuly day

After work, I went to the returned to my new house home (<--这个词在这句话听上去更好。) with my baby. Today is was (<--过去时态) a sunny day. Today and the I took my baby into the community to play a qiuqian on the swings. My baby played of very happily. We are bought a pineapple in on our way home. Baby said acid.haha. (<--这句话意思是：小孩说了“酸”。这时你想表达的意思吗？) I will give you a baby photo of my baby below. Have a nice day.

有进步，jingjing！继续像这样写！