To my 2017
Today I watch a Ted called'how to use your freedom time.' In the 2017 I set up three goals to myself.First, I will work out to be slim.Second,I hope my hearing ability and expressing ability will get into a high level.Third,I will pay attention to my radio channel.
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To my 2017
Today, I watched a Ted called'how to use your freedom time.' In the 2017 I set up three goals to myself.First, I will work out to be slim.Second, I hope my hearing ability and expressing ability will get into a high level.Third, I will pay attention to my radio channel.0
To my 2017
Today I watched a Ted called "*how to use your freedom time."** In the 2017, I set up three goals to for myself. First, I will work out to be slim. Second, I hope my hearing listening ability and expressing ability will get into to a high level. Third, I will pay attention to my radio channel.Notes:
* In English, you need a space before your opening quote and a space after the closing one. You also need spaces after periods and commas.
** There is no Ted talk called "how to use your freedom time." There is "How to gain control of your free time." if so, you need to use its actual title. If you want to talk about the contents of the talk without the actual title, then you need to remove the quote marks. Finally "freedom time" is not an actual expression and will confuse most English speakers. I believe you want to use the idiom "free time."
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