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Keep up good work! You write well and there are only a few small errors.

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Great paragraph!!  Just some organization and the difference between "knowing" and "learning" (I have that same problem in Russian).  Keep up the good work!!

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Hi! I`m Kate. I`m 18 e. o eighteen-years-old. I have red and long red hair and green eyes. I like meeting new people and knowing new things learning new subjects. I live in Russia, in a small town near Tumen. I live with my family: my granny grandmother, (We can say "granny," but in writing, it's better to use "grandmother.") my mom, and my little brother. I`m a student. I study at a university in Moscow, focusing on the faculty topic of the Internet. I want to became web-designer because I`d like making photos on at a professional level, but now currently it`s impossible for me. I like reading different books, watching films (historical, fantasy, and yet I also very love cartoons, especially Walt Disney). I enjoy listening to music (classical, rock). My main hobby is learning languages: English, Italian, and I`m going to learn Japanese and French in my future because I need more practice. I like cats and springtime (Here, it's better to include "time" because "cats" and "spring" are not related to each other.) :) My favorite food is … I have actually do not have a favorite food; I eat everything if it is tasty. :) I just don`t know what else to write about myself, so bye. Thanks a lot. :)

Hi Kate, and welcome to Italki! I hope the corrections and comments I've made are helpful to you. Please let me know if you have any questions. Keep learning! =)