Lantern Festival

The Lantern Festival in China took place today. I all the day for worked for the whole day. After I came home from worke i with, my baby, and my husband, and I go went to watch lantern shows. There were a lot of lanterns displayed in the public square; I's the scene was very beautiful.

Do Would you want like to see a photo? ok,I give you show I have posted one below. Isn't it beautiful?

Today, I ate chinese food tangyuan (glutinous rice balls). I's It's very sweet. Welcome to China, China is a beautiful country!

元宵节快乐，jingjing！请注意英文的时态规则：过去时态的动词跟现在时的动词不一样。中文的动词用元一样，但是英文动词必须改变符合不同的时态。

Lantern Festival

The Iantern Festival in China was today. I worked all the day. When I came home from work I went with my baby and my husband to watch the lantern shows. A lot of lanterns were in the public square. They were very beautiful. Do you want to see? Ok, I give you a show. Isn't it beautiful? Today I ate the Chinese food tangyuan. It's very sweet. Welcome to China. China is a beautiful country.

Very well written!