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Skyler Wang
The Earthquake !! There was an strong earthquake at one twelve this morning. I really got a shock to jump out from my bed. My wife opened the door of our department as soon as she could, and I awoke my children as soon as I could. I thought might we have some little earthquake after the main earthquake, so I stayed awake for couple minutes. Then I left some text to my parent to let them know we ere safe and make sure them safe too. After I was sure there were no more earthquakes coming, I went back to my bed again.

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The Earthquake !!

There was an strong earthquake at one twelve 1:12 (We don't write words for time.) this morning.
I was really got a shocked to and jumped out from my bed. My wife opened the door of our department apartment ("Department" 是“部门”。) as soon as she could, and I awoke my children as soon as I could immediately afterward. (<--最好不要反复用同样的一句话。)

I thought might we have some little earthquake aftershocks ("Aftershock" 就是“余震”。) after the main earthquake, so I stayed awake for a couple of minutes. Then I left some sent a text to my parents to let them know that we were (过去时态) safe and to make sure them they were safe too.

After I was sure there were no more earthquakes coming, I went back to my bed again.

你好,Skyler。希望你全家都没事。是大地震吗?我还没有看新闻呢,所以我不知道震得多厉害。请多保重!

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