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HAVE A FESTIVAL It is 0 o'clock in China.Today is The Lantern Festival. It has a long history in China and it is the first important festival after the Spring Festival.We eat yuaoxiao,watch fireworks,Guess riddles and see yangko. I think it will be an interesting day today.

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Hello, here are the corrections I have made. Please, let me know if it was useful and if you have any questions! 


Original:

HAVE A FESTIVAL

It is 0 o'clock in China.Today is The Lantern Festival. It has a long history in China and it is the first important festival after the Spring Festival.We eat yuaoxiao,watch fireworks,Guess riddles and see yangko.
I think it will be an interesting day today.


Correction:

We are having a festival! 

It is midnight in China, and today is The Lantern Festival. It has a long history in China, and it is the first important festival after the Spring Festival. We eat yuaoxiao, watch fireworks, guess riddles and see yangko.
I think it will be an interesting day today.



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HAVE A FESTIVAL (have a good festival?)

It is 0 o'clock in China.Today is The Lantern Festival. It has a long history in China and it is the first important festival after the Spring Festival.We eat yuaoxiao,watch fireworks,Guess riddles and see yangko.
I think it will be an interesting day today.


It's a good text. The only mistake you've made is 0'clock. It's not very common in english, and you should avoid it.

You should use: Midnight or twelve o'clock at night.

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Hi there, here are my corrections. I hope this is useful, let me know if you have any questions about them!

HAVE A FESTIVAL Festival

It is 0 o'clock midnight (for 0 o clock we always say midnight)in China. (there is always a space after a full-stop in English)Today is the day of The Lantern Festival. It has a long history in China and it is the first important festival after the Spring Festival. We eat yuaoxiao, (we also always use a space after a comma in English)watch fireworks, guess(we never use capital letters after commas) riddles and see watch ('watch' is always better than see if you are going to stand or sit and watch something for a long time)yangko.
I think it will be an interesting day today.
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WE'RE HAVING A FESTIVAL

It is 12:00 o'clock AM in China. Today is the Lantern Festival. It has a long history in China, and it is the first important festival holiday (最好不要多用一个词。) after the Spring Festival. We eat yuanxiao, watch fireworks, guess riddles, and see yangko.

I think it will be an interesting day today.

元宵节快乐，veraverawu！ =)

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