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A late marriage is a common trend. Some reasons cause this are Hi there, could you please review this to see if it makes sense? 1. Nowadays many people have encountered many challenges more than before in their life, such as, a person who has spent enormous time on studying or digesting new knowledge is for following the world fast pace. 2. A late marriage is a common trend. Some reasons cause this are, people pursuing higher education, or enjoying living alone or living a better quality of life, and so on. Thank you so much for your help!

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A late marriage is a common trend. Some potential causes for this are...

1. People of today's world encounter more challenges than people of the past. For example, nowadays people must study a variety of disciplines and spend a lot of time following current events to keep up with the fast pace of the modern world. 

2. A late marriage is a common trend. Some potential causes for this are that more and more people are pursuing higher education. Another potential causes are that people enjoy alternative lifestyles that were previously considered "untraditional" such as living alone.
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Marrying later than usual is a growing, common trend. Some reasons behind this growing trend are:

1. Nowadays people are encountering many more challenges than before in their lives, such as the enormous amount of time one needs to spend on studying or digesting new knowledge for this fast-paced world .


2. People pursuing higher education, enjoying living alone, a higher quality of life and so on.

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Some Reasons for a Late Marriage

Hi there, could you please review this to see if it makes sense?

1. Nowadays in this past pace world, many people have encountered many challenges, more than ever before in their life. An example of this is many people have spent enormous time on studying and digesting new knowledge

2. Nowadays a late marriage is a common trend. Three reasons for this are, people are pursuing higher education, enjoying living alone or living a better quality of life. and so on.

Thank you so much for your help


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Hi 刘雨佳, maybe on our side, some parents have already given up their idea of pushing the marriage of their children earlier. :)
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我们这边会被家长催婚,相亲。特别是过年,你们那边也是吗

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