School
School is a place where you learn new things, besides learning new things, you make friends and sometimes those friends become very important in your life. At some point, all the people go to school either to learn something or just to socialize with others. Some people hate school and would prefer to stay at home instead, but in reality you have to go to school in order to have a career later. Overall, school give you excellent tools to learn anything.
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School
School is a place where you (Avoid using the "royal you" when writing.) people learn new things. Besides learning new things (Try not to be repetitive.) that, you people make friends, and sometimes those friends become very important in your life. At some point, all the people go to school either to learn something or just to socialize with others. Some people hate school and would prefer to stay at home instead, but in reality, you people have to go to school in order to have a career later. Overall, school give you people excellent tools to learn anything.
Nicely written Fernanda. How long have you been in Canada? Living there will definitely help your English improve since you'll be surrounded by English-speakers (unless you're in French Canada). If you have any questions, please feel free to ask =)
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School
School is a place where you learn new things. Besides learning new things, you make friends and sometimes those friends become very important in your life. At some point, everyone goes to school either to learn something or just to socialize with others*. Some people hate school and would prefer to stay at home instead, but in reality you have to go to school in order to have a career later. Overall, school gives you excellent tools to learn anything.*?!
Very well written!
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Thanks!!!
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Good job! If i am not mistaken you learning English now? I think you have good results!
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