What would you like to change in your world, and how would you go about doing it.
We live in a world that seems to be happy but the reality is that we suffer a lot of injustices. From my point of view, we have many reasons for trying to change it.
In the first place, I would like to talk about racism, one of the biggest problems in our society. Unfortunately, people are not tolerant of others just for be considered different. For example, in this moment there are more than sixty-five millions of refugees. Secondly, women are discriminated in their jobs (they earn less money than men for the same job), in the politic life and so on.
We have to encourage every people for being more sensitive to this type of situations. Maybe inspiring families to educate their children in a more tolerant way.
To sum up, everyone could do something in order to become this word in a fair place. In my opinion, it is a possible task although it was very difficult
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What would you like to change in your world, and how would you go about doing it?
We live in a world that seems to be happy but the reality is that we suffer a lot of injustices. From my point of view, we have many reasons for trying to change it.In the first place, I would like to talk about racism, one of the biggest problems in our society. Unfortunately, people are not tolerant of others just for being different. For example, at this moment there are, worldwide, more than sixty-five million refugees. Secondly, women are discriminated against in their jobs, earning less money than men for the same job, in political life, and so on.
We have to encourage everyone to be more sensitive to this type of situation. Maybe asking families to educate their children in a more tolerant way.
To sum up, everyone could do something to make this world a fairer place. In my opinion, it is possible although it is very difficult.
Very well written!
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What would you like to change in your world, and how would you go about doing it?
We live in a world that seems to be happy, but the reality is that we suffer a lot of injustices. From my point of view, we have many reasons for trying to change it.In the first place, I would like to talk about racism, one of the biggest problems in our society. Unfortunately, people are not tolerant of others just because they are considered different. For example, at this moment there are more than sixty-five millions of refugees. Secondly, women are discriminated against in their jobs (they earn less money than men for the same job), in their political life, and so on.
We have to encourage every person to be more sensitive to these types of situations, maybe inspiring families to educate their children in a more tolerant way.
To sum up, everyone could do something in order to make this world become a more fair place. In my opinion, it is a possible task although it would be a very difficult one.
Very nicely written, and good sentiments!
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