About virtual water
Now, I'm learning about water problems at school. So I'm going to write about how I think to solve that.
I think it is important not to buy too much food. There are so many different kinds of foods available in developed countries, and you will want to buy them. But you can't eat all of them and the foods you can't eat up will be throw away. This is waste of "virtual water". So you have to buy food as much as you can eat.
And don't forget we are shering the water as "virtual water ".
The more the number of developed countries increase, the more food will be consumed.
The water we can use is limited, so we have to use it (with?) saving.
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About virtual water
Now, I'm learning about water problems at school, so I'm going to write about how I think to solve that.I think it is important not to buy too much food. There are so many different kinds of foods available in developed countries, and you will want to buy them. But you can't eat all of them and the foods you can't eat up will be thrown away. This is a waste of "virtual water." So you have to buy food as much as you can eat.
And don't forget we are sharing the water as "virtual water ."
The more the number of developed countries increases, the more food will be consumed.
The water we can use is limited, so we have to use it judiciously.
You did a great job! I recommend that you explain the definition of "virtual water." Also, I think the word "judiciously" or "conservatively" would be the most natural.
We should always think about the environment!
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About virtual water
Now, I'm learning about water problems at school. So I'm going to write about how I think we can solve that.I think it is important not to buy too much food. There are so many different kinds of food available in developed countries, and you will want to buy them. But you can't eat all of it and the food you can't eat up will be thrown away. This is a waste of "virtual water". So you have to buy as much food as you can eat.
And don't forget that we are sharing the water as "virtual water ".
The higher the number of developed countries increase, the more food will be consumed.
The water we can use is limited, so we have to use it frugally.
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