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My sencere feelings Can you check my English and make it sound more natural, please? To smell the air is wonderful for me. To know how harshness nature is to understand how warmth inside further in other words. Expoturing nature boosts my senses. Let's explore in nature! It's all mine.

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My sencere feelings

Can you check my English and make it sound more natural, please?
To smell the air is wonderful for me. To know how harshness nature is to understand how warmth inside further in other words. Expoturing nature boosts my senses. Let's explore in nature! It's all mine.

Not sure quite what you are trying to say, how about .....


"For me smelling the air is wonderful.

Knowing how harsh nature is, makes me understand how warm I am inside my home.

Exploring nature boosts my senses, so I will explore nature, for it is there for me to enjoy."

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My sincere feelings

Can you check my English and make it sound more natural, please?
To smell the air is wonderful for me. To know how harshness nature is, is to further understand how  the warmth inside further in other words. Exploring nature boosts my senses. Let's explore in nature! It's all mine.


Good.  I wasn't sure I captured the meaning of the 3rd sentence.  Does it appear correct to you ?  Maybe you need another sentence before the 3rd sentence to introduce the concept.

What do you mean by the last sentence  "It's all mine."  I think nature is for everyone to enjoy.

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My sincere feelings

Can you check my English and make it sound more natural, please?

To smell the air is I get a wonderful feeling when I smell the air. To Knowing how harshness (<-- I'm not sure if this is the word you're looking for. "Harsh" in Japanese is 荒々しい or 荒荒しい according to Google.) nature is can be means to understanding how the depth of its warmth inside further in other words. Exposure to nature boosts my senses. Let's explore in nature together! It's all mine.

Hi Mayumi! Since you asked for a more natural-sounding correction, I've gone ahead and done that. Please feel free to ask me any questions you may have.

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