Today's life
I got up late this morning, and went to the convenience store to buy breakfast. I bought two bread. I was so hungry. I ate all of them. After finishing my breakfast, I went to the station to wait the bus. I was afraid of catching up with the bus. Fortunatelly, I got on the bus. One hour later, I went to my company. Today's work was so boring. I feel tired today.
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Today's life
I got up late this morning, and went to the convenience store to buy breakfast. I bought two loaves of bread. I was so hungry. I ate both of them. After finishing my breakfast, I went to the station to wait for the bus. I was afraid of missing the bus. Fortunatelly, I got on the bus. One hour later, I went to my company. Today's work was very boring. I feel tired today.1
Hi there, here are my corrections. I hope this is useful, let me know if you have any questions about them!
Today's life My day / My life today / Life today
I got up late this morning, and went to the convenience store to buy breakfast. I bought two loaves of (bread is uncountable, so if you bought 2, it must be '2 loaves of bread' if they were big. or if they were small you can say 2 bread rolls)bread. I was so hungry. that (here it is a good idea to join 2 sentences together. This gives you a range of sentence structures, both simple and complex sentences. This makes everything flow better)I ate all both (when it is 2 of something we say 'both' not 'all')of them. After finishing my breakfast, I went to the bus stop / bus station (bus stop if it is small, bus station for a really big building where many buses go from)to wait for the bus. I was afraid of worried I was going to miss catching up with the bus. Fortunately, I managed to catch it, and (again good to join the sentences here)got on the bus one hour later, I was at work, which (we always say 'go to work' instead of 'go to my company'. Again here, it is good to join the sentences together to make it flow better)went to my company. Today's work was so boring today so now(you can use now here to avoid repetition to the word 'today') I feel tired. today.0
went to -> arrived at
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