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I usually don't spare time to record a day, but something greatly meaningful happened to me, so that I want to write it down for my recalling anytime. Yesterday was a long long day and the second most tiring day ever since I started living here in Beijing.
Since I moved from Peking University's dormitory to a house around Shuangjing, I had to bring my scooter up to the area.
When I checked Baidu's map, it was expected to take about two hours by a bicycle for 20km, thus I thought it would be manageable for me to drive it down to my neighborhood.
After having lunch late in the afternoon, I headed for Peking University by bus with my scooter battery charged fully. It was heavy but I could stand the weight while thinking the moment when I finally would drive it.
After having the battery equipped, I began driving on the shoulders next to roadways. Since the battery might lack electricity on my way home, I was so worried that maintained its pace within 20km/hour. Except for the concern, everything seemed simple and smooth at first.
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I usually don't spare (or 'spend') time to record a day, but something greatly (or 'very') meaningful happened to me, so that I want to write it down for my recalling anytime (or 'so I can reference it anytime'). Yesterday was a long, long day and the second most tiring day ever since I started living here in Beijing.Since I moved from Peking University's dormitory to a house around Shuangjing, I had to bring my scooter up to the area.
When I checked Baidu's map, it was expected to take about two hours by a bicycle for (or 'to travel') 20km,; thus, I thought it would be manageable for me to drive it down to my neighborhood.
After having lunch late in the afternoon, I headed for Peking University by bus with my scooter battery charged fully. It was heavy but I could stand the weight while thinking about (or 'toward') the moment when I finally would drive it.
After having the battery equipped, I began driving on the shoulders next to roadways. Since I was worried that the battery might lack (or 'run out of') electricity on my way home, I was so worried that I maintained its pace within 20km/hour. Except for the concern, everything seemed simple and smooth at first.
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