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My holidays.:D Hi, how's it going you guys??:) I hope you are able to enjoy this weekend. I have no plan in spite of i have holidays for 6 days. I had have a plan that go to club with my friend yesterday. But my friend had heavy stomachache so we can't go there. To tell the truth, i was soooooo dissapointed.:( But, there's no use complaining, so i went to the DVD shop and rented 8 DVDs.:] haha I'm going to just stay my home and watch DVDs during this holidays. It's like a geek isn't it? :D Today, I watched "The shawshank redemption" . It is a very famous movie. It was published in 1994 in America. The story of a man wrongfully convicted and imprisoned in the shawshank. He is never give up and being loved by everyone due to his honest character. It was really really good. I was moved to tears and I was encouraged by this movie. If you have a time, you should watch this movie. This movie is worth watching... i think.:) Well, I'm going to study for TOEIC test on this Saturday. see ya and thank you for reading.:)

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My holidays.:D

Hi, how's it going you guys??:)
I hope you are able to enjoy this weekend.

I have no plan in spite of i having 6 days of holiday.
I had have a plan that go to a club with my friend yesterday. But my friend had a heavy stomachache so we can't go there. To tell the truth, i was soooooo dissapointed.:(
But, there's no use complaining, so i went to the DVD shop and rented 8 DVDs.:] haha

I'm going to just stay my home and watch DVDs during this these holidays.
It's like a geeky isn't it? :D (or I'm like a geek, aren't I?)

Today, I watched "The Shawshank Redemption" .
It is a very famous movie. It was published released in 1994 in America.
The story of a man wrongfully convicted and imprisoned in the Shawshank.
He is never gives up and being is loved by everyone due to his honest character.

It was really really good. I was moved to tears and I was encouraged by this movie. (More common would be: This movie encouraged me and moved me to tears.)

If you have the time, you should watch this movie. This movie is worth watching... i think.:)

Well, I'm going to study for TOEIC test on this Saturday.
see ya and thank you for reading.:)


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I hope you had a nice Golden Week.
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My holidays.:D

Hi, how's it going you guys??:)
I hope you are were able to enjoy this weekend.

I have no plans in spite of even though I have holidays for 6 days.
I had have a planned that go to go clubbing with my friend yesterday. But my friend had a heavy stomachache so we can't couldn't go there. To tell the truth, i was soooooo disappointed.:(
But, there's no use complaining, so i went to the DVD shop and rented 8 DVDs.:] haha

I'm going to just stay at my home and watch DVDs during this holidays.
It's like a geek kinda geeky isn't it? :D

Today, I watched "The shawshank redemption" .
It is a very famous movie. It was published released in 1994 in America.
It is the story of a man wrongfully convicted and imprisoned in the shawshank.
He is never gives up and is being loved by everyone due to his honest character.

It was really really good. I was moved to tears and I was encouraged motivated by this movie.
If you have the time, you should watch this movie. This movie is worth watching... i think.:)

Well, I'm going to study for the TOEIC test on this Saturday.
see ya and thank you for reading.:)

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Great writing! My favorite part of Shawshank Redemption was when they talked about the Count of Monte Cristo :)
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