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My vacation How time flies! My vacation will end soon and I have to go to work tomorrow. I enjoyed my holiday but that doesn't mean I dislike my job. My job brings meaning to my life and leaves me fulfilled. I also enjoy the peace and quiet that comes after work, It relaxes and rejuvenates me to start again.

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My vacation

How time flies! My vacation will end soon and I will have to go to work tomorrow.
I enjoyed my holiday but that doesn't mean I dislike my job. My job brings meaning to my life and leaves me fulfilled. I also enjoy the peace and quiet that comes after work, it relaxes and rejuvenates me to start again.
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My Vacation

How time flies! My vacation will come to an end and I will have to return to work tomorrow.
I enjoyed my holiday, but that doesn't mean that I dislike my job. It gives my life a meaningful purpose and it enables me to be fulfilled. I also enjoy the peaceful time that occurs after work as well. It helps me to relax and provides me with the strength to move on with my life.

Good job! While there wasn't much wrong grammatically with your composition, I just modified it a bit to make it sound better to my native ears. Note that we only use a reflexive pronoun ("-self" words) as a direct object when the object is the same as the subject of the verb [i.e. You are teaching yourself English or I see myself as a decent tennis player]. I hope that this helps you. J.

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