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Titanic I remember clearly I drew the Titanic when I was only 10 years old. Since I was a child (now 24 years old) ,Titanic's history has fascinated me. How that monster of steel and Iron could sink just with hit an iceberg? It is supposed it was unsinkable .....or at least his constructors believed that. Despite many people think, Titanic's sinking hasn't been the mayor maritime catastrophe in all this years. This "honor" is taken by the vessel S.S. Wilhelm Gustloff which sinking cost more than 7000 lives. No matters how many years have passed since the ship of dreams gone to the bottom of the sea, their leyend always will be alive.

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Titanic

I remember clearly that I drew the Titanic when I was only 10 years old.  Titanic's history has fascinated me since I was a child (now 24 years old) How that monster of steel and Iron could sink just with hit because of  an  iceberg? It is supposed it was was supposed to be unsinkable .....or at least that is what ithis constructors  the shipbuilders Harland and Wolf believed that.
Despite what many people think, Titanic's sinking hasn't been the mayor  maritime catastrophe in all this years. This "honor" is taken by the vessel S.S. Wilhelm Gustloff which the sinking of which cost more than 7000 lives.
No matters how many years have passed since the ship of dreams gone  went to the bottom of the sea, their leyend the legend always will be alive.



Your english is very good. I am from Northern Ireland where the Titanic was built. The story is definitely being kept alive in the new Titanic quarter in the city of Belfast.

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Titanic

I remember clearly I drew the Titanic when I was only 10 years old. Since I was a child (I'm now 24) the Titanic's history has fascinated me. How could that monster of steel and iron sink just by hitting an iceberg? It was supposed to be unsinkable .....or at least its builders thought so.
Despite what many people think, Titanic's sinking hasn't been the worst maritime catastrophe in all these years. This "honor" is taken by the vessel S.S. Wilhelm Gustloff whose sinking cost more than 7000 lives.
No matter how many years have passed since the ship of dreams has gone to the bottom of the sea, their legend will always live on.

Very well written!

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