Travel Plan of London and Paris
This April I a, going to London and Paris with my sister and my friends. I am so excited about it. Although there’s a lot of thing to do before the trip. We have to reserve our lives and search the information of transportation and sightseeing. I still look forward to go there. I can’t wait to try the afternoon tea and fish & chips. Also I plan to watch “the lion king” which is recommend by many person.
Our plan in Paris is no plan. We just walk on the street feel the romantic atmosphere and take some photos. Of course we will eat some French dessert too.
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Travel Plan of London and Paris
This April, I am going to London and Paris with my sister and my friends. I am so excited about it, although there’s a lot of thing to do before the trip. We have to reserve our lives lodging and search the for information of about transportation and sightseeing. I still look forward to going there. I can’t wait to try the afternoon tea and fish & chips. Also, I plan to watch “The Lion King,” (Titles of plays are capitalized.) which is recommend by many person people recommended.
Hi Kelly! Nicely written. I hope my corrections are helpful. Have fun planning your trip! =)
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