The Lion
The lion is very beautiful animal. It has a fluffy mane, long tail and strong paws. Mane color can vary between light tan and black. The lions are covered with short stiff hair. The male lion is the head of a family of lions. The lion doesn’t hunt. It protects a territory. Female lions hunt in a pride.
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The Lion
The lion is very beautiful animal. It has a fluffy mane, long tail and strong paws. Mane color can vary between light tan and black. The lions are covered with short stiff hair. The male lion is the head of a family of lions. The lion doesn’t hunt. It protects a territory. Female lions hunt in a pride.This is very good. The only change I would make would be...
"The color of the mane can vary between..." or "The color of the mane varies between..."
Either of those would sound more natural to an American English speaker.
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The Lion
The lion is very beautiful animal. It has a fluffy mane, a long tail and strong paws. The Mane's color can vary between from light tan and to black. The Lions are covered with short stiff hair. The male lion is the head of a pride family of lions. The lion doesn’t He does not hunt but It guards his protects a territory. Females lions do the hunts in a pride.Want to progress faster?
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