大家好!!!
大家好!我叫苏文丽。我是美国人。我今年十五岁。我上十年级。我家有四口人。妈妈,哥哥,姐姐和我。我有一只猫。他的名字是Kaleb。我喜欢红色,黑色和紫色。我想去中国,韩国,日本和法国。我只会说英文和一点点中文,韩语和法语。很高兴认识你们!
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大家好!!!
大家好!我叫苏文丽。我是美国人。我今年十五岁。我上十年级。我家有四口个人:妈妈、哥哥、姐姐和我。我有一只猫。他的名字是Kaleb。我喜欢红色、黑色和紫色。我想去中国、韩国、日本和法国。我只会说英文和一点点中文、韩语和法语。很高兴认识你们!你好,苏文丽!很高兴知道你想学中文!你跟我的学生年龄一样的 =)
你写得很好!你刚开始学,对不对?
A few tips to help you:
1) We don't usually use 口 as a measure word for 人. We'll say 口 when no object follows it (e.g. 一家四口), but if there's a 人 there, we stick to 个 as the measure word. Regionally, this could be different though (someone can correct me on this).
2) In Chinese, we have a special punctuation mark called the 顿号 (、) that's used to separate items on lists. This punctuation mark is only used for this purpose; it does not take the place of the comma anywhere else. To type it, turn on your Chinese keyboard and press the backslash key (\).
I hope my corrections are helpful. 继续加油学习!
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大家好!!!
大家好!我叫苏文丽。我是美国人。我今年十五岁。我上十年级。我家有四口人。妈妈,哥哥,姐姐和我。我有一只猫。0
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