My holiday
I'm holidy today.
I'm coming in Shimonoseki city to enjoy my holidy.
I'm going to see the movie and studying English.
Shimonoseki city is next to my city.
But to arrive there take an hour and half from my house.
It's hard a little.
But In Shimonoseki city, There are more restaurant and shop than my city.
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My holiday
I'm holiday today.I'm coming in going to Shimonoseki city to enjoy my holiday.
I'm going to see the a movie and studying English.
Shimonoseki city is next to my city, but to arrive get there, it takes an hour and half from my house.
It's a little hard a little, but In Shimonoseki city, there are more restaurants and shops than in my city.
Hi Yoshihiro! Great effort! I hope my corrections are useful to you =)
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My holiday
I'm on holiday today.I'm going to Shimonoseki city to enjoy my holiday.
I'm going to see a movie and study English.
Shimonoseki city is next to mine.
But to arrive there takes an hour and half from my house.
It's a little hard.
But in Shimonoseki city, there are more restaurants and shops than in my city.
Very well written!
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