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I realized that Surfing the internet and every evening drinking are meaningless. I know that, but I just can't stop doing they. If I can quit these habit I can get more productive life. I can read more book, I can study more English instead of Surfing the internet and drinking alcohol. Moreover,I can spent more helty days. I can get enough sleep deeply without alcohol. There are many good things. I'll try it!! I mean it!!

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I realized that surfing the internet and every evening drinking every evening are meaningless.

I know that, but I just can't stop doing they it.
If I can quit these habits, I can get have a more productive life.
I can read more books, I can study more English instead of surfing the internet and drinking alcohol.
Moreover, I can spent have more healthy days.
I can get enough deep sleep deeply without alcohol.
There are many good things.
I'll try it!! I mean it!!


Great ideas here, Yuji! In the quest of personal development, I feel like we can all benefit from leaving behind bad habits, or activities that don't benefit us. Best of luck in the future! And if you have any questions about any of my corrections, please let me know :)


Hope this helps!


Joshua

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I realized that Surfing the internet and drinking every evening drinking are meaningless (activities).

I know that, but I just can't stop doing theym. (if not adding activities to line above then "... just can't stop.")
If I can quit these habits I can live a get more productive life.
I can read more books, I can study more English instead of Surfing the internet and drinking alcohol.
Moreover,I can spentd more healthy days.
I can get deep enough sleep without alcohol.
There are many good things.
I'll try it!! I mean it!!

がんばって!!

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Yes, I realized that also, but I still keep doing it! (*_^)

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