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you have a Facebook account? i don't use chat much,feel SNS better than some chat tools~ many people don't use italki much(´;ェ;`)just use for study... i want talk about hobby,sport and so on with friend,but i don't know how to talk then i meet the other person at the first time,...(´･ω･｀) then if i have some picture,we can find talk-theme! and i want be friend,so i think... use SNS more good! あぁ…英語の文法がよくわからなくなってきた(-_-;)

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Do You Have a Facebook Account?

I don't use chat much. I feel SNSsare better than some chat tools.~
Many people don't use italki much. (´;ェ;`) I just use it for studying...
I want to talk about hobbies, sportswith friends, and so on, but I don't know how to talk when I meet the other person for the first time... (´･ω･｀)
However, if we have some pictures, we could maybe find a theme we could talk about!
And I want to make (many) friends, so I think using SNSs are (much) better!

 

Note:

You are not referring to a specific type of social-networking service in your statements. As an aside note, service is a countable noun in this example. Hence, it’d be wise to use the plural short form (SNSs) instead.

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 Do you have a Facebook account?

I don't use chat much. I feel SNS is better than some chat tools.
Many people don't use chat on italki much; only for studying.
I want to talk about hobbies and sports with friends,but  don't know how when I meet them for the first time.
If we had pictures, maybe we could find a theme to talk about. I want to make friends, so I think using SNS is better.

あぁ…英語の文法がよくわからなくなってきた(-_-;)


I understood the meaning of your entry but a few mistakes were made with sentence fragments that are easily avoidable by using puncuation marks. It is important in English language that you use proper capitalization as well. I always try to use the least many words possible to keep the sentence structure simple and the meaning to the point.  Punctuation marks come in good use in these instances.

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Do you have a Facebook account?

i don't use Chat much; I feel SNS (Social Networking Services) are better than some chat tools~
many people don't use italki much for socializing (´;ェ;`) they just use it for studying...
i want to talk about hobbies,sports and so on with friends,but i don't know how to talk when i meet the other person at for the first time,...(´･ω･｀)
then if i have some pictures,we can find talk-theme! (?)
and i want  be  to make friends,so i think... using SNS is more good is better!

あぁ…英語の文法がよくわからなくなってきた(-_-;)

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Good effort. Message me your Facebook info.
 

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Hi! I have a fb account, but I really like skype for improve my english and conversation. Feel free to add me if you want: chiara.barrymore have a nice day (´･ω･｀)
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I have a facebook account. And yes, I totally agree with you when you said that some people don't use italki as much as other sites. I think that for some, italki is just an arena where one could find language buddies. And once they do, they fly off to Skype, YMessenger, Facebook and other sites. Btw, I could add you up on facebook. I can share my facebook page, too. That is, if you like.

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