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My dream house I think that if I could to have a lot of money I could do many things, and this moment I think in my dream home. It will be around a beautiful landscape, with lots of trees, a pond, a swimming pool, jacuzzi ... I will do fantastic parties with my friends. I know, this is a stupid idea, but I need a subject for this post. In reality, I only need money for live more relaxed and being able to travel around the world without thinking in the money or I being able to live without any problem

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My dream house

I think that if I could to have (Frecuentemente, inglés no utiliza el infinitivo después de otro verbo.) a lot of money, I could do many things, and at this moment I am thinking in about my dream home.

It will be around surrounded by a beautiful landscape with lots of trees, a pond, a swimming pool, and a Jacuzzi. I will do hold fantastic parties with my friends.

I know this is a stupid idea, but I need a subject for this post. In reality, I only need money for to live more relaxed and being able to travel around the world without thinking in the about money costs or I being able to live without any problems.

Nicely written Sheila! I hope my corrections are helpful for you. Please let me know if you have any questions =)

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