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Art of writing Writing is not easy task but it gets easier when we use the commom sense. To be sensible enough to choose the correct words. We must write exactly what we mean, nothing more. Avoid subordinate sentences with long periods. "Between two words, choose always the most simple; between two simple words, choose the shortest" The problem´s not as simple as took but we can´t give up of writing, after all, writing to learn writing!! Isn´t it? (Hi, everyone! is it correct?)

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Art of writing

Writing is not an easy task, but it gets easier when we use the commom sense. That is, to be sensible enough to choose the correct words. We must write exactly what we mean, nothing more. Avoid subordinate sentences with long phrases. "Between two words, always choose always the most simplest; between two simple words, choose the shortest" The problem´s not as simple as that ?? but we can´t give up of writing, after all, to be writing is to learn writing!! Isn´t it?
(Hi, everyone! is it correct?)

I didn't understand the phrase "not as simple as took"
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Art of writing

Writing is not an easy task but it gets easier when we use the common sense. To be sensible enough to choose the correct words. We must write exactly what we mean, nothing more. Avoid subordinate sentences with long periods (periods - ?). "Between two words, choose always* the most simpler;** between two simple words, choose the shorter" ** The problem´s not as simple as took (took - ?). 
But we can´t give up of writing, after all, it is writing to learn writing, isn´t it? (you must not separate the tag).
(Hi, everyone! is it correct?)

Notes:
* 'Always choose' is a better word order.

** For a choice of only two things always use 'simpler', better, shorter, bigger etc.
For a choice of more than two things always use 'simplest', best, shortest, biggest etc.

The first of the two options is the better.
The third option is the best. 

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