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너의일기 (: 23일 01월 2017 년 (일일/일월/ 이천십칠년 ) 너의일기 안녕하세요, 저는 엘레나라고 해요. 어제는 너무 늦게 잤어서 오늘은 1시에 일어났어요. 하루종일 아무 중대한 것도 하지 않았어요. 여동생과 남동생과 같이 tv를 보고 햄버거를 먹었어요. So... I'm trying to write a diary to practice my korean. In the date, I know maybe it is not normal to write it like I did (일일/일월/ 이천십칠년 ) but I'm doing it so I can practice numbers too ( if you were wondering yourself why I wrote it like that) I did most of this really short text without looking at my old books so I could test how much I remember. I know! I need to study again ㅠㅠ Thank you for your help! *omg, I just saw I mixed 너 and 저 .

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En Corea escribimos año/mes/dia haha. Entonces 이천십칠년/일월/일일.
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'너의 일기'. 오, 참신하고 기발한데요, ㅋㅋㅋ. 노래 제목 같아요.
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나의 일기 (:

23일 01월 2017 년
(일일/일월/ 이천십칠년 )

2017년 1월 23일

나의 일기

안녕하세요, 저는 엘레나라고 해요.
어제는 너무 늦게 자서 오늘은 오후 1시에 일어났어요. 하루종일 아무 것도 하지 않았어요. 여동생과 남동생과 같이 tv를 보고 햄버거를 먹었어요.


So... I'm trying to write a diary to practice my korean.
In the date, I know maybe it is not normal to write it like I did (일일/일월/ 이천십칠년 ) but I'm doing it so I can practice numbers too ( if you were wondering yourself why I wrote it like that)

I did most of this really short text without looking at my old books so I could test how much I remember. I know! I need to study again ㅠㅠ

Thank you for your help!

*omg, I just saw I mixed 너 and 저 ...

 

 -> I think you did a great job to write Korean excepting tiny mistakes. 응원할께요!! :)

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