Do you know Sichuan？
I come from Sichuan Chengdu,a beautiful city in China.Sichuan are famous for delicious food, beauiful girls, and beautiful scenery.Sichuan cuisine is very famous in China,such as Hot pot,Bouilli and Fuqi feipian,et al.There are many famous tourist attractions in Sichuan,such as Jiuzhaigou Valley,Mount Emei,Dujiangyan Irrigation System and Mount Siguniang,et al. In addition, there are many lovely pandas.Sichuan is the home of pandas.The people in Sichuan are also enthusiastic.Welcome to Sichuan！
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Do you know Sichuan？
I come from Sichuan Chengdu,a beautiful city in China.It is famous for delicious food, beautiful girls, and beautiful scenery.Sichuan cuisine is very famous in China,such as Hot pot,Bouilli and Fuqi feipian,et al.There are many famous tourist attractions in Sichuan,such as Jiuzhaigou Valley,Mount Emei,Dujiangyan Irrigation System and Mount Siguniang,et al. In addition, there are many lovely pandas and is the home of pandas.The people in Sichuan are also enthusiastic.Welcome to Sichuan！0
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Do you know Sichuan？ Have you heard of Sichuan? / Introduction to Sichuan / Explore Sichuan
I come from Sichuan, Chengdu, (commas in between 'Chengdu', always when you give the name of the province after the city, you put comas in between the name of the province or state or country etc.)a beautiful city in China. (Always need a space after a full-stop)Sichuan are is ('is' because cities are singular)famous for delicious food, beautiful girls, and beautiful scenery. (Always need a space after a full-stop)Sichuan cuisine is very famous in China, examples include such as hot pot, (always need a space after a comma)bouilli and fuqi feipian (we don't usually use capital letters for the names of foods) et al among many others. (et al. is only used very formally to refer to a number of people. For example, if you have a number of authors for a book, but you only want to list two of them you would say for example: 'Smith, Jones et al.' You could use 'etc.' instead, but etc. is usually used when the reader already knows that there are other examples. If the reader doesn't already know that there are other examples you can use the phrase 'among many others')There are many famous tourist attractions in Sichuan such as Jiuzhaigou Valley, Mount Emei, Dujiangyan Irrigation System and Mount Siguniang,et al to name just a few(this is another alternative to the phrase 'among many others'). In addition, there are many lovely pandas. Sichuan is the home of the pandas(when we talk about the species, instead of saying 'pandas' we usually say 'the panda'. Pandas talks about individual pandas, not the species). The people in Sichuan are also enthusiastic. Welcome to Sichuan！0
Do you know Sichuan？
I come from Sichuan Chengdu, a beautiful city in China. Sichuan are is famous for delicious food, beauiful girls, and beautiful scenery. Sichuan cuisine, such as Hot pot, Bouilli, and Fuqi feipian is very famous in China.There are many famous tourist attractions in Sichuan, such as Jiuzhaigou Valley, Mount Emei, Dujiangyan Irrigation System and Mount Siguniang, et al. In addition, there are many lovely pandas. Sichuan is the home of pandas. The people in Sichuan are also enthusiastic cordial. We will welcome to Sichuan！You forgot to add space after each common or period.
Translate the word "热情" as cordial.
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