Corrections · 10
又高兴又担心
今天我躺在床上看电视。我放在桌子上(把)一束花儿(放在桌子上)。今天我挺开心的。因为我检查的结果很好,所以我很高兴。虽然我很高兴,可是我的妈妈很担心。 先(因为)一个人偷(了)她的自行车然后她去了派出所最后她回来家(回家来),丢钱,(是)很麻烦(的事情)!1. Subject +把+Object +V+....... The structure indicates that an action is applied to somebody or something with the emphasis that the action will bring about a result or influence. "我把一束花儿放在桌子上",The action is "放", and the result is "花儿在桌子上了"。 so you need to use“把” in this sentence.
2."偷"is a verb,and the action is done when you talk about that, so "了 "should be added after this verb.
3.“回+place+来/去” e.g:回家来/回学校去。 “来”and "去" is direction. if you stay home and you are going to school,you can say "我想回学校去" to your mother. but if your mum and you stay home, you dad stay outside and he is going home ,you can say"爸爸想回家来"to your mum.
又高兴又担心
今天我躺在床上看电视。我又高兴又担心
今天我躺在床上看电视。我放在桌子上一束花儿。今天我挺开心的。因为我检查的结果很好,所以我很高兴。虽然我很高兴,可是我的妈妈很担心。(伤心sad或者烦心worry) 先一个人偷她的自行车,然后她去了派出所,处理好后她回来家,丢钱,很麻烦!(丢失是件麻烦事。)又高兴又担心
今天我躺在床上看电视。我放在桌子上放了一束花儿。今天我挺开心的,因为我检查的结果很好,所以我很高兴 (这句话重复了“今天我挺开心”,所以不需要)。虽然我很高兴,可是我的妈妈很担心。 先有一个人偷了她的自行车,然后她去了派出所,最后她回来家来丢了钱。很麻烦!Mary,写得不错。如果有问题请问。继续加油学习!
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