IELTS Writing Task 1- Describing A Pie Chart

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The pie chart below, provides data on the average age of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2002. It also shows future projections for 2050. The ages of people are divided into three categories: 0-14 years, 15-59 years, and 60 years and older. Overall, by 2050, the number of 15-59-year-old people is expected to increase in Yemen, whereas in Italy, it is expected to fall. At the same time, while the future for people older than 60 is forecasted to increase in Yemen, it is expected to increase greatly in Italy.

As we can see from the chart, in Yemen in 2000, people aged 0-14 years old accounted for over half of the total population, this is expected to decrease in 2050, when this age group will be around 37% of the total population. At the same time, middle aged people (15-59 years old) will increase (from approximately 47% in 2000, to around 57% in 2050). It is clear that the number of old people (those aged 60 or more) won't change drastically.

On the other hand, the Italian situation is fairly different, while Italians aged 15-59 accounted for 61.1% of the total population in 2000, this is expected to drop in 2050, when this group of people will be less than 50% of the total population. The same downward trend is expected for those aged 0-14, whereas the amount of Italians aged 60 or more, will significantly increase, growing from 24.1% in 2000, to 42.3% in 2050.

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As we can see from the chart, in Yemen, in 2000, Yemeni people aged 0-14 years accounted for over half of the total population; this rate feature is expected to decrease in 2050, when they will be drop to around 37% of the total population. At the same time, the group of middle-aged people (15-59 years) will increase (rising from approximately 47% in 2000 to around 57% in 2050). It is clear that the number of old people - aged more than 60 years - won't change remarkably. 

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