Computers and Children In my opinion, using a computer have more positive effects than negative effects on children. As a start, some computer games are deisgned to improve creativity of children. In

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Computers and Children In my opinion, using a computer have more positive effects than negative effects on children. As a start, some computer games are deisgned to improve creativity of children. In these games, the children can pretend any character and gain some experience with that character even if it is imaginary character. As result of these, they feel more free to realize themselves than past. Also it is important not forget that our social and business life need people in different character and qualification than 20-30 years ago. And technology helps children to gain these skills. For example, there is some computer games to teach children algorithms by using simple blocks, signs and picture. Thus, most of children can learn to write simple computer programs before they learn reading or writing. Additionaly, we can not deny that internet has a great opportunity to advance ourselves. The children can attend some open courses, or learn anything they want just by watching some videos on youtube. This way in learning seems more interesting than reading reading a book or making some research at a library. As summary, the world is changing by time and we should keep up with the times.

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Computers and Children

In my opinion, using a computer have has more positive effects than negative effects on children. As a start(Firstly), some computer games are deisigned to improve creativity of children. In these games, the children can pretend to be any character and gain some experience with that character even if it is an imaginary character. As a result of these, they feel more free to realise(discover) themselves than in the past. Also it is important not to forget that in our social and business life, needs people in different character and qualification than 20-30 years ago. And technology helps children to gain these skills. For example, there is are some computer games designed to teach children algorithms by using simple blocks, signs and picture. Thus, most of some children can learn to write simple computer programs before they learn reading or writing. Additionaly, we can not deny that the internet has a great opportunity to advance ourselves. The children can attend some open courses, or learn anything they want just by watching some videos on youtube. This way in of learning seems more interesting than reading reading a book or making some research at a library. As In summary, the world is changing by time daily and we should keep up with the times.

We must always remember that computers will repeat errors: "garbage in = garbage out"

They are a tool which can be much more effective than a book.

You could have written: "using a computer can be more positive for children than negative."

The "of these" is not required.

Maybe "most" children could learn, but without statistics we do not know. "some" is the uncertain option.

"cannot" is one word, which may be shortened to "can't"

"realize" is the American spelling.

Excellent, I hope my comments are helpful.

Computers and Children

In my opinion, using the computer has more positive than negative effects on children. Some computer games are deisgned to develop creativity in children. By playing these games, children can pretend to be any character and learn something from it, even if it is an imaginary character. As a result, they feel more free to realize themselves. Also, it is important not to forget that our social and business life needs people of different characters and qualifications than twenty or thirty years ago. Technology helps children to gain these skills. For example, there are some computer games that teach children algorithms by using simple blocks, signs and pictures. Thus, most children can learn to write simple computer programs before they learn reading or writing. Additionaly, we cannot deny that the internet gives us a great opportunity to better ourselves. Children can attend open courses or learn anything they want, just by watching videos on youtube. This type of learning seems more interesting than reading a book or doing research at the library. To summarize, the world is changing and we should keep up with it.

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