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Hobby Please check my text for mistakes. Thank you very much! Why do we need to have hobby? Every person has his own interests and passions. From the childhood we have the inclination to different activities and subjects. They say it's important to have interest or in other words hobby.If we have the lack of success in privite life or on work, hobby will distract us fromfalures. Hobby brings plesure, helps to forget problems and make own life richer and more varied. Do you have hobby?

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Hobby

Please check my text for mistakes. Thank you very much!
Why do we need to have a hobby?
Every person has his/her (Always include both genders in general statements) own interests and passions. From the our childhood, we have the inclination to partake in different activities and subjects. They say it's important to have an interest, or, in other words, a hobby.If we have the lack a shortage (This sounds better than "the lack") of success in our private lives or on at work, a hobby will distract us from our falures setbacks. ("Failures" is a rather strong word and comes across sounding like "all hope is lost." It's best to avoid using it whenever possible.) A hobby brings pleasure, helps us to forget our problems, and makes our own lives richer and more varied.
Do you have a hobby?

Nicely written Elena. Please remember to include indefinite articles when necessary. Feel free to ask any questions you may have =)

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Hobby

Please check my text for mistakes. Thank you very much!
Why do we need to have a hobby?
Every person has his own interests and passions. From the childhood we have the inclination to different activities and subjects. They say it's important to have an interest or in other words a hobby.If we have the a lack of success in private life or on work, a hobby will distract us from failures. A hobby brings pleasure, helps us to forget problems and makes our own life richer and more varied.
Do you have a hobby?

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