WINTER IS SO COLD These days are so cold,we was in the house won't go outside.Outside not only blowing but also rainning.But my parents even go to work,all everyone.But in the north ,winter is so funn

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WINTER IS SO COLD These days are so cold,we was in the house won't go outside.Outside not only blowing but also rainning.But my parents even go to work,all everyone.But in the north ,winter is so funny ,although cold than south.Because they have snow,they can paly the sonwer.If have change ,I will go to the winter country,enjoy the winter

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WINTER IS SO COLD

These days are so cold that we was are in the house and won't go outside. Outside, it's not only blowing windy, (英语从来不说“刮风”； “windy” 是“有风”) but it's also raining. But Still, my parents even go to work,all just like everyone else. But However, (英语的句子最好不要用连词开始) in the north, winter is so funny, ("Fun" 是“好玩“，而 “funny” 是“好笑”) although even though it's colder than the south. Because they have snow,they can play the snow. If have change I could, I will would go to the winter country (你这是什么意思？可以用中文写出来吗？) and enjoy the winter.

写得还好 padaln。请注意你的标点符号：英语的逗号和句号前面没有空格，而后面永远要有一个空格。

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