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Example Of Task 2 (Text Exercise + My Solution)
It is argued that governments should make laws to enforce recycling, because at the moment, a small amount of trash gets recycled. Actually, this is already happening worldwide in order to protect the environment and the health of people. Recycling means drastically reducing CO2 emissions of cities. It helps save economic resources, and helps preserve raw materials. For instance, in Rome and many other cities governments have implemented laws, making recycling mandatory for all citizens. Over a period of two years, the amount of recycled waste has reached an incredible 70%. This is an example of how public decisions succeed, having effectively influenced the behavior of families, and others towards recycling. The choice to make it a legal requirement is positive, and can be powerful, but it cannot be the only instrument to influence proper management of trash. Every citizen should become aware of the benefits of recycling, by teaching them the most important environmental factors. In addition, they have to be guided on how they can put the actions of recycling to use every day. Recycling is not so difficult, if proper education is given by the institutions. Through a little engagement, everyone can learn how to properly collect and separate trash. Overall, this could generate a positive outcome for the entire community. To sum up, there is evidence that governments could achieve clear results by legally enforcing recycling.
Overall, Giulio I think you did pretty well. I noticed several grammar issues regarding word choice and word placement, as well as the lack in use of commas, and a few spelling errors. If you have any questions, please let me know! If you would like help to practice and improve your English, I'd be happy to help you!
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