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example of task 2 (text exercise + my solution) It is argued that governments should make laws to force recyclig as a small amount of domestic rubbish gets recycled. Actually this is already happening worldwide in order to protect the environmnent and the health of people. Recycling means incredibly reducing the co2 emissions of the cities. It consents to save economic resources and to preserve the use of new raw materials. For instance in the suburb of rome many cities have implemented recycling and it become mandatory for all the citizens. Over a period of 2 years the proportion of recycled waste has reached an interesting level of 70%. This is an example of how public decisions succeded, having effectively influenced the behaviour of families towards recycling. The choice to make it a legal requirement is positive and can be powerful but it cannnot be the only instrument to incentivate a proper management of domestic rubbish. Every citizen could become aware of the benefits of recycling by teaching him the most important environment dynamics. In addition he has to be guided on how he can put in action this principles everyday. Recycling is not so difficult if a proper education is given by the Institutions. Through a little engagement everyone can learn how to properly collect and separe rubbish. This overall could generate positive consequences for the entire community. To sum up there is the evidence that governments could obtain clear results by legally forcing recycling.

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Example Of Task 2 (Text Exercise + My Solution)


It is argued that governments should make laws to enforce recycling, because at the moment, a small amount of trash gets recycled. Actually, this is already happening worldwide in order to protect the environment and the health of people. Recycling means drastically reducing CO2 emissions of cities. It helps save economic resources, and helps preserve raw materials. For instance, in Rome and many other cities governments have implemented laws, making recycling mandatory for all citizens. Over a period of two years, the amount of recycled waste has reached an incredible 70%. This is an example of how public decisions succeed, having effectively influenced the behavior of families, and others towards recycling. The choice to make it a legal requirement is positive, and can be powerful, but it cannot be the only instrument to influence proper management of trash. Every citizen should become aware of the benefits of recycling, by teaching them the most important environmental factors. In addition, they have to be guided on how they can put the actions of recycling to use every day. Recycling is not so difficult, if proper education is given by the institutions. Through a little engagement, everyone can learn how to properly collect and separate trash. Overall, this could generate a positive outcome for the entire community. To sum up, there is evidence that governments could achieve clear results by legally enforcing recycling.


Overall, Giulio I think you did pretty well. I noticed several grammar issues regarding word choice and word placement, as well as the lack in use of commas, and a few spelling errors. If you have any questions, please let me know! If you would like help to practice and improve your English, I'd be happy to help you!

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