I like winter.
I like winter season because snow is white and pure. In winter, the weather is cold. The sky is dark and it often rainly or snowy. However a cup of coffee is very delicious in this season.
I like go out while its is snowing. Also I like drink hot chocolate as soon as I go into home. Time is winter and very cold in my country. Even so winter is beautiful.
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I like winter.
I like the winter season (You are mentioning a specific season, so the definite article is needed.) because snow is white and pure. In winter, the weather is cold, the sky is dark, and it often rains or snows. However, a cup of coffee is very delicious in during ("During" sounds better than "in" here.) this season.I like go out while it is snowing. Also I also (It sounds better when you put "also" after the subject instead of starting a sentence with it.) like to drink hot chocolate as soon as I go into get home. Time is Wintertime is and very cold in my country; even so, (When two sentences are very closely related and/or one follows the other extremely well, it's usually best to separate them with a semicolon and combine them into one sentence.) winter is beautiful.
Well written zafer! I hope my corrections and comments provide some help. Please let me know if you have any further questions and/or comments.
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