English grammar.
There is a park which has a beautiful lake near my mansion. We enjoyed looking a park from here but a high building was built in front of my mansion tree month ago.
We can no longer see a great scenary from here as we used.
私のマンションの近くに美しい湖がある公園があります。私達はここから公園を見るのを楽しんでいましたが3ヶ月前に大きなビルが家の前に建ちました。もう素晴らしい景色を以前のように見ることができなくなりました。
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English grammar.
There is a park which has a beautiful lake near my mansion. We enjoyed looking at the park from the mansion but a high tall building was built in front of my mansion tree three months ago.We no longer have a great scenary scenary from here as like we used to.
Hi Yasuyuki,
We use "tall" more often for describing the height of things with a narrow base. (E.g Thomas is taller than Jamie. / This is a tall office building.)
We use "high" for describing the height of things with a wider base. (E.g Mount Fuji is a majestic and high mountain.)
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私のマンションの近くに美しい湖がある公園があります。私達はここから公園を見るのを楽しんでいましたが3ヶ月前に大きなビルが家の前に建ちました。もう素晴らしい景色を以前のように見ることができなくなりました。
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Thank you for correct my sentence.
ありがとうございます。
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It might be seen as a bit pretentious describing your house as a mansion. I would simply say 'my house'
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There is a park which has a beautiful lake near my mansion. We enjoyed looking 'the' park from here but a 'tall' building was built in front of my mansion 'three' 'months' ago.
We can no longer see 'the' great 'scenery' from here as we used 'to'.
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