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My school life I'm a second year university student. I major in nutrition. It's more busy than I had expected. And my friends who major in arts have a lot of time, so they lead a dissipated life. They sometimes skip the class but they can pass on the next glade. I don't think we are the same university student . But i think i entered in the university to study nutrition and become nutritionist in the future, so i keep up however i'm in hard.

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My school life

I'm a second year university student. I major in nutrition.
It's more busy than I had expected.
And On the other hand, my friends who major in arts have a lot of time, so they lead a dissipated more carefree life. They sometimes skip the class but they can pass on  and move up to the next glade grade.
I don't think we are the same university student. 「同じ大学生とは思えない」を言いたかったと思いますがこのsentenceでは違和感を感じます。言い方を変えないといけないかもしれない。I can't believe we're all university students! はどうですか？
But I I think i I entered in the university to study nutrition and become a nutritionist in the future, so i I keep up however i'm in hard even though it's hard for me.


*These are just my suggestions!  Good luck with your studies! (^_^)

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My school life

I'm a second year university student. I am majoring in nutrition. (Use present continuous tense because it's ongoing.)
It's more busy than I had expected.
And (It's best not to start sentences with conjunctions, although there is no grammatical rule against it.) My friends who major in arts have a lot of time, so they lead a dissipated life. They sometimes skip the classes, but they can pass onto the next grade.
I don't think we are the same type of university student.
But I think I (Always capitalize the first-person "I.") entered in the university to study nutrition and in order to become nutritionist in the future, so I keep up however i'm in no matter how hard it is.

Nicely written いぐち　めみ! I hope my corrections and comments provide some help. Please let me know if you have any further questions/comments.

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