'Under a Cloud' 在云下
中国在云下 覆盖了中国大部分地区的烟雾在英国的新闻上播出。 记者引用一个男人说，它损害了他的孩子的健康，如 “生活在云下”。
他应该说它是 “ 像生活在一个有毒的云 ” 因为然在英语中，这种表达有另一个，隐喻的意义：怀疑，麻烦，不利 或 耻辱
* “smog”一词源于 “烟雾” 和 “雾” 在20世纪50年代，伦敦有所谓的 “豌豆汤的” - 烟雾如此稠密，它就像豌豆汤
The smog* which has blanketed a large part of China has featured on the news in the UK. The reporter quotes a man as saying it is damaging his children's health, like 'living under a cloud', He should say it is "like living in a poisonous cloud" because in English this expression has another, metaphorical, meaning : to be under suspicion, in trouble, out of favour, or in disgrace.
* "smog" is derived from the words 'smoke' and 'fog'. In the 1950s London had what were called 'peasoupers' - smog so dense that it was like pea soup.
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'Under a Cloud' 在云下
中国在云下： 覆盖了中国大部分地区的烟雾（这里说的应该是雾霾）在英国的新闻上播出。 记者引用一个男人的话说，雾霾损害了他（的）孩子的健康，如同（or仿佛）“生活在云下”。他应该说它是 “ 像生活在一个有毒的云下” 因为然在英语中，这种表达有另一个隐喻的意义：怀疑，麻烦，不利或耻辱。
* “smog”一词源于 “烟雾” 和 “雾” 在20世纪50年代，伦敦有所谓的 “豌豆汤式的” ——烟雾如此稠密，（它）就像豌豆汤 。
The smog* which has blanketed a large part of China has featured on the news in the UK. The reporter quotes a man as saying it is damaging his children's health, like 'living under a cloud', He should say it is "like living in a poisonous cloud" because in English this expression has another, metaphorical, meaning : to be under suspicion, in trouble, out of favour, or in disgrace.
* "smog" is derived from the words 'smoke' and 'fog'. In the 1950s London had what were called 'peasoupers' - smog so dense that it was like pea soup.
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'Under a Cloud' 在云下
中国在云下 覆盖了中国大部分地区的烟雾在英国的新闻上播出。 记者引用一个男人说的话，它损害了他的（这个“的”可以有，也可以没有）孩子的健康，如 “生活在云下”。他应该说它是 “ 像生活在一个有毒的云里 ” 因为然在英语中，这种表达有另一个意思，隐喻的意义：怀疑，麻烦，不利 或 耻辱
* “smog”一词源于 “烟雾” 和 “雾” 在20世纪50年代，伦敦有所谓的 “豌豆汤的” - 烟雾如此稠密，它就像豌豆汤
The smog* which has blanketed a large part of China has featured on the news in the UK. The reporter quotes a man as saying it is damaging his children's health, like 'living under a cloud', He should say it is "like living in a poisonous cloud" because in English this expression has another, metaphorical, meaning : to be under suspicion, in trouble, out of favour, or in disgrace.
* "smog" is derived from the words 'smoke' and 'fog'. In the 1950s London had what were called 'peasoupers' - smog so dense that it was like pea soup.
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'Under a Cloud' 在云下
中国在云下， 覆盖了中国大部分地区的烟雾在英国的新闻上播出。 记者引用一个男人说，它损害了他的孩子的健康，如 “生活在云下”。他应该说它是 “ 像生活在一个有毒的云 ”（里）， 因为然在英语中，这种表达有另一个隐喻的意义：怀疑，麻烦，不利 或 耻辱
* “smog”一词源于 “烟雾” 和 “雾”， 在20世纪50年代，伦敦有所谓的 “豌豆汤的（气候现象）” - 烟雾如此稠密，它就像豌豆汤
The smog* which has blanketed a large part of China has featured on the news in the UK. The reporter quotes a man as saying it is damaging his children's health, like 'living under a cloud', He should say it is "like living in a poisonous cloud" because in English this expression has another, metaphorical, meaning : to be under suspicion, in trouble, out of favour, or in disgrace.
* "smog" is derived from the words 'smoke' and 'fog'. In the 1950s London had what were called 'peasoupers' - smog so dense that it was like pea soup.
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'Under a Cloud' 在云下
中国在云下覆盖了中国大部分地区的烟雾(I can't say 烟雾is a wrong word, but in China, we use another word 雾霾 to specifically describe this phenomenon) 在英国的新闻上播出。 记者引用一个男人的话说，它雾霾损害了他的孩子的健康，如同（or 像） “生活在云下”。
他应该说它是 “ 像生活在一片（if you want to emphasise the number of cloud, use "一片“ rather than "一个”， or you can just say ignore it）有毒的云里 ”， 因为然在英语中，这种表达有另一个, 隐喻的意义：被怀疑，有麻烦，不利 或 耻辱。
* “smog”一词源于 “烟雾” 和 “雾”。 在20世纪50年代，伦敦有所谓的 “豌豆汤的” - 烟雾如此稠密，它就像豌豆汤
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The smog* which has blanketed a large part of China has featured on the news in the UK. The reporter quotes a man as saying it is damaging his children's health, like 'living under a cloud', He should say it is "like living in a poisonous cloud" because in English this expression has another, metaphorical, meaning : to be under suspicion, in trouble, out of favour, or in disgrace.
* "smog" is derived from the words 'smoke' and 'fog'. In the 1950s London had what were called 'peasoupers' - smog so dense that it was like pea soup.
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'Under a Cloud' 在云下
中国在云下：覆盖了中国大部分地区的烟雾在英国的新闻上播出。记者引用了一个男人说：它烟雾损害了他的(We usually do not use a 的 when referring to family members; that's why I highlighted it in orange and not red.)孩子的健康，如像“生活在云下一样”。他应该说它的是 “ 像生活在一个有毒的云下一样”， 因为然在英语中，这种表达有另一个，隐喻的意义思：被怀疑，麻烦，不利或耻辱。
* “smog”一词源于 “烟雾” 和 “雾”。 在20世纪50年代，伦敦有所谓的 “豌豆汤的”。这烟雾如此稠密，它就像豌豆汤。
The smog* which has blanketed a large part of China has featured on the news in the UK. The reporter quotes a man as saying it is damaging his children's health, like 'living under a cloud', He should say it is "like living in a poisonous cloud" because in English this expression has another, metaphorical, meaning : to be under suspicion, in trouble, out of favour, or in disgrace.
* "smog" is derived from the words 'smoke' and 'fog'. In the 1950s London had what were called 'peasoupers' - smog so dense that it was like pea soup.
Well written Adrian! I've made a few small corrections that I hope will be useful to you. Please let me know if you have any further questions.
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